The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The map
display
the waterfront Change the verb form
displays
area
in the town of Darwin as it was in 2009 and its appearance in 2014. Use synonyms
Overall
, the central part around the Linking Words
lake
remained approximately unchanged, except little development. By 2014, the main change was that below the Use synonyms
lake
industrial Use synonyms
area
had been replaced by Use synonyms
trees
and new buildings.
In the circle of the Use synonyms
footpath
on the left from the Use synonyms
lake
, an industrial Use synonyms
area
was demolished and made way for a swimming pool. The Use synonyms
lake
and Use synonyms
trees
inside the Use synonyms
footpath
and school and convention Use synonyms
center
out of the Change the spelling
centre
footpath
on the northwest stayed at the same place. On the right from the Use synonyms
lake
on both sides of the Use synonyms
footpath
, swimming pools and fishing Use synonyms
area
had not changed.
Below the Use synonyms
area
with the Use synonyms
lake
residential buildings were expanded from 3 to 6 in two lines and next to them the Use synonyms
trees
were appeared to 2014. On the west of the buildings, a university was constructed. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the new Linking Words
footpath
appeared from the side of the road through the Use synonyms
area
to the coast. Use synonyms
At the end
of the Linking Words
footpath
in the sea, a harbour was installed. Use synonyms
Finally
, on the south of the new Linking Words
footpath
, there were lots of Use synonyms
trees
.Use synonyms
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, lake, trees, footpath with synonyms.
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