The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in 2009.
The bar chart compares shares of expenditures for different main categories in four countries in 2009.
It is clear that
shares of food housing and transportation had Add an article
a noticeable
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States
, Canada
, the United Kingdom
and Japan
compared to other figures that
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health
care and clothing.
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as health
Japan
stood at the highest level and it doubled approximately that United States
, standing at 23 per cent
. In the United Kingdom
, there was slight
rise in food expenditure than Add an article
a slight
Canada
, at around 21 per cent
and 15 per cent
, respectively. Additionally
, Housing was the highest figure among other expenditures. Canada
was the lowest index in this
category, standing at 20 per cent
. Japan
and the United Kingdom
were higher than it and they had 2 per cent
and 4 per cent
increases, compared to Canada
's figure. In housing, United
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States
was
exactly the biggest number, at around 26 per Verb problem
had
cent
. Moreover
, the figures for Transportation in the United States
and Canada
did not have a big difference, standing at 19 per cent
and 20 per cent
, respectively. The United Kingdom
's index was higher than Japan
's. As for Health care and Clothing expenditures, in all parts there were unnoticeable figures, they all were under the 10 per cent
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