The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist activities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist activities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the modification on an island after facilities are built for tourist activities.
Overall
,
it is clear that
infrastructures are set all over the island and a pier is added.
However
, The island shape and most trees still remain the same place .
To begin
with, a reception is built in the centre of the isle surrounded by a vehicle track.
This
route is linked to the new restaurant and pier which is located at the top and the bottom of the reception.
At the end
of the new pier, the path is separated into two sides
furthermore
each side has its own sailboat.
Additionally
, on Both sides of the centre building, there are two circular residential areas with the footpath which consists of nine accommodations on the right-hand side and six on the left. There is a pedestrian way to a beach which is located on the far left of the isle,
besides
, there is a swimming activity on the beach.
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