The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.

The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.
The provided bar chart shows the quantity of four different types of
waste
which were gathered in a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. The four categories of
waste
consist of paper, glass, tin and garden. They are presented in blue, orange, grey and yellow respectively.
Overall
, the amount of each type of
waste
fluctuated during the period.
First,
the amount of paper
waste
slightly dropped from 57
tons
in 2011 to 40
tons
in 2013.
However
, it increased to 51
tons
in 2014 and dramatically rose to 70
tons
in 2015.
In addition
, glass
waste
was the second place in almost every year except for 2013 when it became the first place since paper
waste
significantly decreased.
Moreover
, tin
waste
stayed at the third position throughout 5-year of the data collection.
Finally
, garden
waste
had the lowest number among all types. It went down to 15
tons
in 2012 which is the all-time lowest figure presented.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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