The bar chart illustrated the amount of 4 types of wastes collected in a recycling centre during the period from 2011 to 2015. The 4 types of wastes were paper, glass, tins, and garden.
The provided bar chart shows the quantity of four different types of
waste
which were gathered in a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015.
The four categories of Use synonyms
waste
consist of paper, glass, tin and garden. They are presented in blue, orange, grey and yellow respectively.
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Overall
, the amount of each type of Linking Words
waste
fluctuated during the period. Use synonyms
First,
the amount of paper Linking Words
waste
slightly dropped from 57 Use synonyms
tons
in 2011 to 40 Use synonyms
tons
in 2013. Use synonyms
However
, it increased to 51 Linking Words
tons
in 2014 and dramatically rose to 70 Use synonyms
tons
in 2015. Use synonyms
In addition
, glass Linking Words
waste
was the second place in almost every year except for 2013 when it became the first place since paper Use synonyms
waste
significantly decreased. Use synonyms
Moreover
, tin Linking Words
waste
stayed at the third position throughout 5-year of the data collection. Use synonyms
Finally
, garden Linking Words
waste
had the lowest number among all types. It went down to 15 Use synonyms
tons
in 2012 which is the all-time lowest figure presented.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tons with synonyms.
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