The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
The bar chart illustrates data about people's consumption of
coffee
and tea who live in Australian
cities
.
Overall
, in all selected
cities
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fresh
coffee
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than 45 per cent calculated by city
residents
. Meanwhile, going to a café for
coffee
or tea has grown by about 50% in the past 4 weeks. First of all, in Sydney,
residents
have an average demand for products. To buy fresh
coffee
rate is just above 60% ,
while
, going to a café and buying instant
coffee
shows a rate of around 40 %. In Melbourne instant
coffee
was consumed by about 47% of
residents
whereas
going café set a record across five
cities
with nearly 67% in Hobart people showed the same result with
this
type of consumption
also
Hobart stayed as dominant for buying instant
coffee
. In Adelaide and Brisbane,
residents
have almost the same demond with lower consumption than the other 3
cities
.
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