The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities
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The bar chart illustrates data about people's consumption of
coffee
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and tea who live in Australian
cities
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.
Overall
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, in all selected
cities
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apply
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fresh
coffee
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drinking
less
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is less
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than 45 per cent calculated by city
residents
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. Meanwhile, going to a café for
coffee
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or tea has grown by about 50% in the past 4 weeks. First of all, in Sydney,
residents
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have an average demand for products. To buy fresh
coffee
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rate is just above 60% ,
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, going to a café and buying instant
coffee
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shows a rate of around 40 %. In Melbourne instant
coffee
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was consumed by about 47% of
residents
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whereas
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going café set a record across five
cities
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with nearly 67% in Hobart people showed the same result with
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type of consumption
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Hobart stayed as dominant for buying instant
coffee
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. In Adelaide and Brisbane,
residents
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have almost the same demond with lower consumption than the other 3
cities
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.
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