The pie charts below show enrollment in different fields of study at a particular uni versity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart presents a CLysdale University Enrollment. It illustrates the percentage of male and female
students
that
have chosen different fields of education.
The highest number of male Correct pronoun usage
who
students
chose enginering
(45%), and the lowest percentage of male Correct your spelling
engineering
students
prefer
humanity science. For women the most popular field of science is Wrong verb form
preferred
edacation
(35% chose Correct your spelling
education
this
subject), and the less popular scienseis
social science.
From these Correct your spelling
science is
sciences
science
data
we can understand that women prefer the humanities, Add a comma
data,
while
men prefer technical sciences.On the female faculty
you can notice a tendency that the percentages do not vary much, Add a comma
faculty,
while
in the male faculty
you can see a maximum of one typical choice of field of knowledge, since the gap from the second place in popularity among male Add a comma
faculty,
students
is 20 percent
, and in the female faculty it is only 5 Change the spelling
per cent
percent
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per cent
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