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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the marriage status of
people
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 residing in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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.
Overall
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, in both pie charts, there are six categories against which percentages are given to reflect marital status in
Canada
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 and
Australia
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. In
Canada
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, most
people
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 are separated but not divorced followed by married
people
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.
While
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 in
Australia
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, a major part of the
population
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 consists of married
people
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. Both countries have the lowest divorce rates. The first pie chart depicts that 53% of the community falls under the category of separated but not divorced in
Canada
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.
Furthermore
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, it is shown that 29%
population
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 is married. As far as the
population
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 of single person is concerned, it consists of 7% out of 100%. In
Canada
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, only 1% of the
population
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 is of divorced individuals. The second chart shows that 46% of
people
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 are married followed by 41% of
people
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 separated but not divorced in
Australia
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.
Moreover
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, it is
also
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 depicted that Only 5%
population
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 comprises single persons. Among all, 2%
population
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 is divorced.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, canada, australia, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "depicts" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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