The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two pie charts illustrate the marriage status of

people

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residing in

Canada

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and

Australia

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Overall

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, in both pie charts, there are six categories against which percentages are given to reflect marital status in

Canada

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and

Australia

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. In

Canada

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, most

people

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are separated but not divorced followed by married

people

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While

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Australia

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, a major part of the

population

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consists of married

people

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. Both countries have the lowest divorce rates. The first pie chart depicts that 53% of the community falls under the category of separated but not divorced in

Canada

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Furthermore

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, it is shown that 29%

population

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is married. As far as the

population

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of single person is concerned, it consists of 7% out of 100%. In

Canada

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, only 1% of the

population

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is of divorced individuals. The second chart shows that 46% of

people

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are married followed by 41% of

people

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separated but not divorced in

Australia

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, it is

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depicted that Only 5%

population

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comprises single persons. Among all, 2%

population

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is divorced.

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Topic Vocabulary:

marital status
population
pie charts
percentage
categories
Married
Single
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Widowed
distribution
noticeable trends
comparison
significantly different
similarities
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