he diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
The map
display
the Grange Change the verb form
displays
Park
as it was in 1920 and its appearance today. Overall
, the size of this
park
remained the same and is still based between Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. By the present time, there is a wide range of changes and public parks look fully different.
On the north and the south of the park
, entrances remained unchanged. However
, the fountain was replaced by a rose
garden
in the middle of the park
and seats near the entrances and in the upper and bottom corners of the west side were moved to the center
and placed around the Change the spelling
centre
rose
garden
. Meanwhile, the stage for musicians on the west side was transformed into an amphitheater
for concerts.
On the east side of the Change the spelling
amphitheatre
park
the Add a comma
park,
rose
garden
was demolished and a cafe was installed there. Furthermore
, a pond for water plants next to the rose
garden
made way for a children's play area. On the southeast, a glasshouse was knocked down and a water feature appeared at the same place. Finally
, seats that stand between the pond and the glasshouse were disappeared.Submitted by lobacheva.design on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words park, rose, garden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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