The chart below compare the number of people per household* in the UK in 1981 and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These
two
charts captured
the difference between the Wrong verb form
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number
of people
in one house, which took place in the UK, from 1981 to 2001.
At first glance at the chart, the minority of houses
were for six people
, while
the number
of two
people
living in one house reached its peak in the two
years. Another noticeable feature is that all of the groups decreased except for two
classes. Interestingly, the gap between the number
of houses
for four people
and for five had the same gap during the two
years.
Digging into the first three categories, fewer people
preferred to live with a crowded population, as the houses
that had six, five, four, and three people
decreased. Also
, the gap between the houses
for six people
doubled, while
the difference between the houses
for three and four people
remained stable.
Additionally
, on the one hand, the alone people
had
dramatically increased, as they mushroomed by 9 Unnecessary verb
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houses
which is the highest increase. On the other hand
, the number
of pairs living in a house slightly increased, as it was 31 houses
then
turned to 34 houses
by the end of the study.Submitted by haneenalnetaif on
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