The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the numbers of US
households
' annual income, expecially
in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The lowest number of Correct your spelling
especially
households
annual income in these three years is those who earn $75,000~$99,999, none of them Change noun form
households'
household's
surpass
fifteen Wrong verb form
surpassing
millions
. The second lowest is Change to singular
million
those annual salary
between $50,000~$74,999, which is about twenty Change the determiner
that annual salary
those annual salaries
millions
people. Change to singular
million
For the
highest one is Change preposition
The
households
who earn
$100,000 or more in 2015, Wrong verb form
earned
it
is around thirty-three Correct pronoun usage
which
millions peoples
.
Fix the agreement mistake
million people
Households
who earn $25,000~$49,000 and less than $25,000 always got the
similar Correct article usage
a
percantage
in Correct your spelling
percentage
this
charts, which is aroundSubmitted by yushin20020625 on
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