Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage, and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-urban migration
  • natural population growth
  • economic inequalities
  • property prices
  • urbanization
  • housing demand
  • land scarcity
  • government policies
  • affordable housing
  • foreign investors
  • construction costs
  • labor costs
  • real estate market
  • housing crisis
  • residential development
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