The table below gives information on concusmer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on concusmer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
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The table provides information about the expenditures of consumers on three distinct items in five nations (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey) in 2002.
Overall
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, it is evident that all five countries spent more on food/drinks/tobacco compared to other items,
while
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the expenditures on leisure/education were less as opposed to the two categories for the nations in 2002. As the graph shows, expenditures on food/tobacco were the highest for Turkey among all other countries, making up 32.14% in 2002. The figure for Ireland was the second highest, with 28.19%.
In contrast
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, Swedish
people
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expensed only 15.77% for the same item, which was the lowest amount. Regarding clothing/Footwear, Italian
people
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spent 9% which was the highest figure among the five countries.
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, the data for Turkey, Ireland, and Spain was relatively similar.
However
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, Swedish’s figure was the lowest, with only 5.40%.
On the other hand
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, for leisure/education, Turkish
people
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spent more, making up 4.35%,
whereas
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the expenses for Italy and Sweden were quite similar, with 3.20% and 3.22% relatively. More interestingly, Spanish
people
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spent only 1.98% on the same category which was one of the lowest figures.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • categories
  • comparison
  • trends
  • patterns
  • economic factors
  • cost of living
  • average income
  • cultural values
  • implications
  • data analysis
  • leisure activities
  • significant differences
  • budget allocation
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