The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in different years
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pie chart illustrates information on how many Verb problem
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people
from 18-25
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to 25
use
various types of devices for watching television in one country in 2009 and 2019. Wrong verb form
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Overall
, there are three devices that showed a decline in use among young people
, while
the other three had a rise in a
the percentage of people
throughout the time period.
According to
the graph, the number of those who watch TV on a mobile phone increased from 15 to 26% in 2019, while
the percentage of tablet
experienced growth from 5 to 19% at the same time period. Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
Moreover
, the highest rise witnessed the figures for flat-screen TV
and accounted for 27% in 2019.
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TVs
Furthermore
, there was a significant decline of 30% in the percentage of young people
who use conventional TV. The number of laptop
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laptops
computer
generally followed the same pattern and a decrease accounted for 8 and 6%, respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
computers
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