The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.

The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site.
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The first picture displays the current layout of
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrial area, and the second picture shows some planned changes in the future. As can be seen, the factories are planned to be replaced with housing and various support facilities,
while
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the farmland is proposed to be repositioned to the east.
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, there are more roads with plans for construction. Looking at the information in more detail for the current picture, the layout of
this
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area is simple, with only factories surrounding the circular road and extending to the east. Moving on to the prediction,
it is clear that
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all factories are planned to be demolished and replaced with more facilities,
such
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as schools and playgrounds located to the east.
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, a medical centre and shops are planned to be situated along the central roundabout. The most significant proposed changes include introducing a T-intersection across the river to reach the housing area.
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, there are plans for constructing a new roundabout positioned to the south of the original one.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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