The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph compares the
number
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of tourists travelling to a particular Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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,
while
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the total
number
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of tourists consistently increased, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships experienced the most significant growth, eventually surpassing those staying on the
island
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.
Visitors
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staying on the
island
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showed a less dramatic rise,with periods of fluctuation before stabilising. In 2010, approximately 0.7
million
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visitors
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chose to stay on the
island
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, compared to only 0.3
million
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staying on
cruise
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ships. By 2015, the
number
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of
cruise
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ship
visitors
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had doubled to 1.5
million
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, overtaking the figure for
island
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visitors
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, which plateaued at the same level. Between 2016 and 2017,
cruise
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ship
visitors
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continued to rise sharply,reaching 2
million
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,
while
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island
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visitors
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increased modestly to 1.5
million
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.The total
number
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of tourists mirrored these trends, growing steadily from 1
million
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in 2010 to over 2.5
million
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by 2015 and
further
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to 3.5
million
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in 2017.
This
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highlights the
increasing
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the increasing
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popularity of
cruise
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ship tourism as the dominant preference among
visitora
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visitors
visitor
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, cruise, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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