The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph compares the
number
of tourists travelling to a particular Caribbean
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island
between 2010 and 2017.
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number
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cruise
ships experienced the most significant growth, eventually surpassing
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island
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Visitors
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island
showed a less dramatic rise,with periods of fluctuation before stabilising. In 2010, approximately 0.7 Use synonyms
million
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visitors
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island
, compared to only 0.3 Use synonyms
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cruise
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visitors
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island
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visitors
increased modestly to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
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million
in 2010 to over 2.5 Use synonyms
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million
in 2017. Use synonyms
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visitors
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