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letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the bolck of flats which he owns. You should include Where you live Explain the problem What he should do

#landlord #noise #bolck #flats
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Dear Mr. Johnson I am writing to tell you how noisy the neighbourhood in your apartment is. In fact, it started a couple of weeks ago after the new block's construction started. As you know the process of building is too excruciating and all of the neighbours are tired of
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 situation. They start their work immediately after the sun rises when everybody is still sleeping and no need to talk about the level of noise they produce.
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 project made everywhere untidy and dusty plus too much noise pollution it brought to our block. I humbly request you to tell the owner about the problem and ask him to start working some hours later when everybody is awake. I look forward to hearing about your response. Sincerely yours, Jack Walker
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Task Achievement
Consider providing a brief introduction to yourself and your location within the building to create a stronger connection with the reader.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs to separate different sections of your letter for better readability. Introducing a paragraph about how the noise affects daily life could enhance your argument.
Task Achievement
To make your letter more persuasive, you might suggest specific actions or solutions beyond just changing the work hours. For example, asking for noise barriers or specific quiet hours.
Task Achievement
Directly addressing the landlord and detailing the issue shows a clear understanding of the task's requirements.
Task Achievement
Your request is clear, and you provide a specific solution, which strongly aligns with the goal of the letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
The structure of your letter follows a logical approach: stating the problem and then suggesting a solution, making your argument coherent.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Tenant
  • Landlord
  • Block of flats
  • Complaint
  • Noise problem
  • Ongoing
  • Nature
  • Source
  • Well-being
  • Daily life
  • Enforce
  • Insulation
  • Regulations
  • Positive resolution
  • Contact details
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