Some people think the government should provide free housing, while others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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to provide free housing, meanwhile others trust that it is not the

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's responsibility.

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housing should be

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the

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views will be

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essay. First of all, the

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of expenditures in

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to manage their country. So, free housing should not become

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for

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the economy

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aspect of the country. The budget should be

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transferred

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care or education.

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2011 the

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for build

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free housing for poverty people, the bugeoning populations overthere infulence the budget to build free housing, and

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the year the

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, it is can given negative impact for growth of the country.

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, if the

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provide free housing the citizens will be lazy because they think they

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need

work

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hard and

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lot

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of money to have

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, people can not be more productive.

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, the

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could make schemes to bear 50% expenses of free housing for their citizens, and the

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bear 50% charge of housing.

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is can become

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solutions

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solution the

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would not feel burdened and the

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not feel difficult

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to have

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, The

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and the

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can go hand in hand to cope

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issue, the

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authority

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have

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to provide

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of job

opportunity

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, the people can essay to find jobs and eventually could reach

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priority

and the result they capable to buying

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a house

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