Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others think scientists make the greatest contribution to the world. Discuss both views!

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the whole

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, and some arguments

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about who are these influencers;

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, one side of

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trend says that governments are responsible

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everything happening,

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the other side says that it is, indeed, the

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responsibility

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report, I will go

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through

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conflict, and

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allow me

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the right point of view. Governments are responsible, strategic, and visible.

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, many people believe that they are leading the whole planet.

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, they are the ones who put the

rules

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that everyone, including

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, must follow.

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, there are a lot of

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and meetings for ministries to discuss the current situations, and relying on

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discussions they decide what will they do as a next step.

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, a lot of people post on Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook that they believe that governments are putting

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because they see them quite often, but

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are

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invisible

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, a survey

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that most of

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citizens

believe in their government's decisions;

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, the majority will follow them, and the leader of humankind is the leader

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the whole planet.

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the points mentioned above are strong, there are adverse points which hold equal strength. Many people think that researchers,

experts

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, and

scientists

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are making the greatest contribution to the

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because, even if none can see them, they study the current situations and look for solutions

as well as

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ways to improve the

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in different aspects. Some reports acknowledged that even though policymakers announce the

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, the researchers are the ones who direct them to publish specific

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.

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,

scientists

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learn

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anthropology, but politicians do not study

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knowledge within their major;

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,

experts

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are more trustworthy to lead the environment. In conclusion, both politicians

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and researchers are affecting the

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;

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, the studies show that

experts

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have the greatest influence on the previous studies of the situations,

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politicians affect the final decision.