The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided tables depict the temperature and daylight hours during the
weekend
of
December
28th to 30th, 2018, in
Sydney
, Australia, and
London
, UK.
Overall
,
Sydney
experienced a warm
weekend
,
while
London
had colder
temperatures
.
Sydney
saw earlier sunrises and later sunsets,
whereas
London
had the opposite trend. In
Sydney
,
temperatures
gradually increased over the
weekend
. Morning
temperatures
rose from 26
°C
on Friday,
December
28th, to 28
°C
on Saturday,
December
29th, peaking at 31
°C
by the end of the
weekend
. Nighttime
temperatures
followed a similar upward trend, increasing by 1
°C
each day. Sunrise and sunset times remained consistent, occurring around 5:45 AM and 8:06 PM, respectively, throughout the
weekend
.
In contrast
,
London
's morning
temperatures
fluctuated during the
weekend
. Starting at a maximum of 9
°C
, they reached a high of 13
°C
on Saturday before dropping back to 10
°C
by Sunday. Nighttime
temperatures
remained relatively constant around 4
°C
throughout the
weekend
. Sunrise and sunset times in
London
occurred at approximately 8:05 AM and 3:58 PM, respectively, each day.
Overall
, these observations highlight the contrasting weather patterns between
Sydney
and
London
during the specified
weekend
in
December
2018.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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