the charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unheaalthy if eaten too much
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pie
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bad
effect on your Add an article
a bad
helath
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health
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pie
charts that have different Use synonyms
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percent
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per cent
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the
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second,
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pie
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many
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much
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sodium
, saturated fat, and Change to a plural noun
sodiums
sugar
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in
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the
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breakfast
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a
lunch, Correct article usage
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the
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dinner
, and Use synonyms
snacks
. The Use synonyms
sodium
and the saturated were consumed more during the Use synonyms
dinner
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sugar
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was
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snacks
.
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are
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sodium
in Use synonyms
dinner
. That Use synonyms
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percent
shows the highest percentage comparing other Replace the word
percentage
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snacks
(14%), Use synonyms
the
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apply
breakfast
(14%), and Use synonyms
a
lunch (29%). There are same amount of Correct article usage
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sodium
in Use synonyms
snacks
and Use synonyms
the
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breakfast
. Meanwhile, there Use synonyms
are
42% Correct subject-verb agreement
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sugar
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snacks
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the
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dinner
, 19% in lunch, and only 16% Use synonyms
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sugar
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the
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breakfast
.
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The
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breakfast
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the
lowest Change preposition
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percent
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per cent
pie
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In
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On
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37
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, percent, sodium, sugar, breakfast, dinner, snacks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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