More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, many
animals
have become on the edge of
extinction
and some of them
classified
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are classified
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endangered
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as endangered
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animals
.
This
is mainly because of the illegal hunters and
irrelevant
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environment
. There are a number of solutions which can help to maintain these rare species.
Firstly
, one obvious
problem
is that the hunters
who
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apply
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do not pay attention
on
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to
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the endangered
animals
list.
In other words
, there are a lot of rural
people
who do not respect the law
by
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because of
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their
behavior
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behaviour
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that
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which
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led
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leads
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to
extinct
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extinction of
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several creatures.
For example
, in China pandas which
considered
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are considered
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endangered are
hurted
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hurt
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by some.
Secondly
, irrelevant
environment
also
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is also
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main
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a main
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factor in why some
animals
are on the verge of
extinction
. To illustrate, when
people
go
in
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on
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picnic
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a picnic
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in their
habitant
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habitat
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, they throw rubbish which
make
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makes
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the
environment
unlivable. There are two effective solutions to the
problem
of the
extinction
. One way to tackle
this
is to implement new laws and regulations. By doing
this
,
people
will respect the strict rules in order to avoid
troubles
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trouble
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.
For instance
, in China Chinese
citizen
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citizens
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do not harm the
animals
because if they disturb them they will be captured by police
officer
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officers
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. Another method of dealing with
this
problem
is to maintain the
environment
.
That is
to say,
government
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the government
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ought to raise
the
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awareness by
educate
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educating
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the population
how
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on how
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the
environment
is essential.
This
solution would hopefully
shows
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show
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how
people
play
vital
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a vital
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rule
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role
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in
term
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terms
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of
keep
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keeping
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the
animals
live
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alive
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.
To sum up
, impose strict laws and educate
people
are effective in dealing with
this
issue. If the state
implemented
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these solutions, the
extinction
problem
will be solved soon.
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