People living in the twenty-first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the twenty-first century, the

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of

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that

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have is better than the

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in previous centuries.

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statement

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the innovation of technology and the

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of

finance

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.

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, the

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of

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nowadays is becoming better than in the past because of the development in the field of technology.

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technology’s development, these machines can work more effectively and it

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increases productivity.

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, they can

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replace humans in some jobs that require physical health.

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, in the past, when

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robots still did not appear,

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had to do a lot of heavy jobs and

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led to

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labor

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productivity

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low.

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, in Japan,

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use robots in some factories to improve their productivity

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of hiring humans,

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in the previous centuries, they had to

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themself.

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, the

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of the

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finance

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is

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a factor that helps improve the

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of residence

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. These days, there are many developed countries and developing countries,

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,

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can have financial

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earn lots of money.

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,

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are able to make a living and improve their

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of

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, many years ago, every country in the world still did not develop enough, so the finances that

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had were not stable enough for them to improve their

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life

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. There are some studies that show that stable

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plays an important role

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improving the

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people’

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life

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as in the 21st century, their

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become

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better than in the past

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the money that they make. In conclusion, in the twenty-first century,

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have a better

quality

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of

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than in previous centuries.

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is because of the invention and the innovation of technology,

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, the

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of

finance

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is

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an important factor that helps

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people’

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life

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become better.