The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016.
The bar graph depicts data about the exportation revenues in two years (2015 and 2016) of products that were classified into five categories, namely petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and
jewellry
, agricultural products and textiles. Correct your spelling
jewellery
Besides
, the table describes the difference in earnings between the two years aforementioned, measured in percentage.
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Overall
, petroleum and merchandise modified by engineering were the main sources of income, Linking Words
while
the least qualified was textiles. Linking Words
Additionally
, all goods had an increase in profits except gems and jewellery which showed a decrease.
In detail, around 60 Linking Words
billion
was Use synonyms
due to
the petroleum exported in 2015, followed by a rise of 3% in 2016. Linking Words
Secondly
, engineered wares represented approximately 58 Linking Words
billion
of earnings during the first year and climbed by 8.5% during the second year. Use synonyms
In addition
, Gemstones were in third place, beginning just above 40 Linking Words
billion
dollars, Use synonyms
however
, they went downhill by 5.18% in 2016. Linking Words
Finally
, despite the fact that the textile industry had its lowest profits in 2015 estimated at roughly 26 Linking Words
billion
, it went up by 15.24% during the Use synonyms
last
year.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion with synonyms.
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