The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given image illustrates the process of producing immediate noodles.
Overall
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, there are eight main stages for manufacturing instant noodles starting from storage silos and finishing with labelling and sealing.
Moreover
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, almost all phases are organized automatically.
The first step is
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delivering
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the flour in a special truck to the storage silos.
After
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this
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, the flour is taken to the mixer, and at the same time water and oil are added too.
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, when all ingredients are mixed together, the mixture goes through the rollers and becomes dough sheets which
after
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this
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goes through the next auto machine to dough strips. The next stage is creating
noodles
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discs from the dough strips and in followed step, it is cooking in oil certain time and drying. Once dry noodle discs are ready, they are sorted into cups where vegetables and spices are added. The final phase
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noddles
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are preparing for distribution and that
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it is necessary to put labels on these cups and sealing.
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