The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given image illustrates the process of producing immediate noodles.
Overall
, there are eight main stages for manufacturing instant noodles starting from storage silos and finishing with labelling and sealing. Linking Words
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, almost all phases are organized automatically.
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The first step is
delivering Linking Words
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the flour in a special truck to the storage silos. Change preposition
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, the flour is taken to the mixer, and at the same time water and oil are added too. Linking Words
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, when all ingredients are mixed together, the mixture goes through the rollers and becomes dough sheets which Linking Words
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goes through the next auto machine to dough strips. The next stage is creating Linking Words
noodles
discs from the dough strips and in followed step, it is cooking in oil certain time and drying.
Once dry noodle discs are ready, they are sorted into cups where vegetables and spices are added. The final phase Fix the agreement mistake
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when
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is when
noddles
are preparing for distribution and that Correct your spelling
noodles
why
it is necessary to put labels on these cups and sealing.Add a missing verb
is why
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