The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The line chart below displays the data of the average number of people who visited a museum during both summer and winter in 2003
Overall
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, there is the statistic of visitors in the UK in the line graph. The X represents the period, and the Y shows the number of visitors.
As a result
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, there are two categories, the first feature represents the whole viewers of the museum at a certain time in hot seasons,
while
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, the second part illustrates the quantity of villagers at different times in cold months. There are a lot of visitors exactly 1400, who prefer to go to the facility at 11:30 am compared to another time in summer. Meanwhile, there are less of humans at 15:00 pm, only 800. In other hand, there are fewer viewers in winter comparing for those during vacations. There are only 600 citizens who were in the museum at 11:30, which is the half of people who did sightseeing in summertime. In both cases the number decreased in the evening.
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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Peak season
  • Off-peak season
  • Visitor influx
  • Steady increase
  • Significant drop
  • Month-on-month comparison
  • Seasonal variation
  • Cultural attraction
  • Tourism trends
  • Historical data
  • Visitor demographics
  • Analytical observation
  • Comparative analysis
  • Statistical evidence
  • Conclusive summary
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