The chart below shows the changes in sales of four different types of books from 2002 to 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The multiple bar chart illustrates the sales of four types of
books
within a decade. The book types include hobby, entertainment, history
, and art.
Overall
, history
books
were the most purchased books
from 2002 to 2012. On the contrary
, hobby books
were the least popular among the categories, moreover
, the popularity was getting worse within the period.
To begin
with, the history
genre started with more than 4 thousand
copies sold in 2002, then
it went up and peaked at more than 10 thousand
copies in 2008, although
the number slightly dropped in 2009, it bounced back to about 9 thousand
. In addition
, the second place was art which was nearly 2 thousand
in 2002, and rocketed to around 4 thousand
in 2012.
Next,
the entertainment category showed the same pattern as history
books
, beginning with approximately 1.8 thousand
to about 3 thousand
in 2008, then
reduced a little, and hit 3 thousand
again in the last
year. Lastly
, when it comes to hobbies, they accounted for the smallest portion with around 1 thousand
and constantly fell into nearly 500 hundred copies at the end
of the period.Submitted by evaagustine11 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, history, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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