Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

With transportation technology advancement, more nations tend to put more emphasis on metro systems than

roads

. Whether the government should spend money on

railways

or

roads

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become a hot controversy. In my opinion, I partly agree that the government should spend more resources on

railways

.

However

, the investment

for

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roads

also

plays an important role in

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the nations

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nations

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development. First and foremost, developing

roads

is important for countries economic growth.

Roads

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an important character

for

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economic

progressing

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. Goods and people have been allowed to move effectively. With better

roads condition

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road conditions

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, vehicles can run

on

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at

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faster

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pace can increase the rate of transferring resources, which could possibly

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the

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business activity.

Furthermore

,

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more money

on

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into

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building

roads

also

encourages automobile industries.

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, Germany's

roads

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condition is the best in the world. It greatly promotes their car industries, they have excellent vehicle brands

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called Porsche

as well as

BMW and Mercedes-Benz.

Therefore

,

governemnts

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governments

spend

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money on

roads

cause beneficial effects

to

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economy

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.

However

, developing on

railways

might

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more important than

roads

. The reason is the capacity of

railways

is much larger compared to automobiles. And they

are generally consider

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as

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more eco-friendly. In developed cities, there are tremendous passengers who take public

transports

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transport

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in their daily life. Railway system

also

has faster

speed

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compared to cars because

it

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they

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can rely on computers which have less bias than

human

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.

Furthermore

, there is a large number of metro using renewable energy.

For instance

,

MTR

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the MTR

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in Hong Kong carry around one million citizens to travel in the city effectively. The

eletricity

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electricity

supply for MTR is mainly wind and solar energies.

Therefore

, governments spend more capital on

railways

, which will bring more beneficial effects than

roads

. In conclusion, I believe that governments should spend more capital on

railways

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railway

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development. On the other side, it is important that they should put resources on

roads

too.

Therefore

, I partly agree that governments should spend capital on

rail

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railroads

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roads

than

roads

.