The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates information regarding the ground floor
plan
of a house and a proposed Use synonyms
plan
for some building work.
Use synonyms
Overall
, both Linking Words
plan
shares the same space Use synonyms
of
the kitchen Change preposition
as
whereas
, the living Linking Words
room
in the new Use synonyms
plan
is large. Stairs have more Use synonyms
room
in the new Use synonyms
plan
.
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Firstly
, the size of the kitchen is bigger than the living Linking Words
room
in the existing Use synonyms
plan
, Use synonyms
however
, the size of the kitchen is smaller in the new Linking Words
plan
. The main door is open and it is directly connecting the stairs in the new Use synonyms
plan
Use synonyms
while
the old Linking Words
plan
has Use synonyms
separate
door for the entrance and for the stairs. Add an article
a separate
In addition
, there are only three doors in Linking Words
a
new Correct article usage
the
plan
, Use synonyms
however
, the old existing floor Linking Words
plan
has four doors.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, organizing dishes in the new Linking Words
plan
is much easier than Use synonyms
the
old Change preposition
in the
plan
because the new Use synonyms
plan
has furniture installed. Both Use synonyms
plans
main entrance faces towards the north direction and the space of the living Change noun form
plan's
plans'
room
remains the same in both plans.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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