The diagrams below show the existing ground floor plan of a house and a proposed plan for some building work. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates information regarding the ground floor
plan
of a house and a proposed plan
for some building work.
Overall
, both plan
shares the same space of
the kitchen Change preposition
as
whereas
, the living room
in the new plan
is large. Stairs have more room
in the new plan
.
Firstly
, the size of the kitchen is bigger than the living room
in the existing plan
, however
, the size of the kitchen is smaller in the new plan
. The main door is open and it is directly connecting the stairs in the new plan
while
the old plan
has separate
door for the entrance and for the stairs. Add an article
a separate
In addition
, there are only three doors in a
new Correct article usage
the
plan
, however
, the old existing floor plan
has four doors.
Furthermore
, organizing dishes in the new plan
is much easier than the
old Change preposition
in the
plan
because the new plan
has furniture installed. Both plans
main entrance faces towards the north direction and the space of the living Change noun form
plan's
plans'
room
remains the same in both plans.Submitted by sateezg on
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