It is clear from the graph that the ratio of smoking men were the highest over the period given, while the women were the lowest in general.
The provided line graph indicates the average of smoking in men and women between 1960 and 2000. The survey shows how many people smoke per one thousand.
Overall
, in all time men smoked more than female but every year the scale of smoking in men was decreasing while
women's average was fluctuating.
To begin
, in 1960 from every 1000 people 600 of them were smoking in the next 10 years
this
number had a very small decrease but in 1975 the quota significantly declined to 500 again after 5 years
this
average saw a little reduction but in 1985 this
amount dramatically dropped to 400 in 1990 had a very small down too and in 1995 this
statistic experienced a great fall eventually in 200 this
rate reached under 300.
Looking at the graph for more details, the average of smoking in person in 1960 was less than 100 people per one thousand by passing 5 years
this
number considerably grew to nearly 200 and remained at the same level in the next 5 years
in 1975 this
proportion notably jumped to over 300 and remained approximately at the same level in next one decade in 1990 had a steady decrease that reached less than 300 again in 1995 significantly went down to around 200 finally
in 200 reached 200.Submitted by amotoh10 on
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