It is clear from the graph that the ratio of smoking men were the highest over the period given, while the women were the lowest in general.

It is clear from the graph that the ratio of smoking men were the highest over the period given, while the women were the lowest in general.
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The provided line graph indicates the average of smoking in men and women between 1960 and 2000. The survey shows how many people smoke per one thousand.
Overall
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, in all time men smoked more than female but every year the scale of smoking in men was decreasing
while
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women's average was fluctuating.
To begin
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, in 1960 from every 1000 people 600 of them were smoking in the next 10
years
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number had a very small decrease but in 1975 the quota significantly declined to 500 again after 5
years
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average saw a little reduction but in 1985
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amount dramatically dropped to 400 in 1990 had a very small down too and in 1995
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statistic experienced a great fall eventually in 200
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rate reached under 300. Looking at the graph for more details, the average of smoking in person in 1960 was less than 100 people per one thousand by passing 5
years
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number considerably grew to nearly 200 and remained at the same level in the next 5
years
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in 1975
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proportion notably jumped to over 300 and remained approximately at the same level in next one decade in 1990 had a steady decrease that reached less than 300 again in 1995 significantly went down to around 200
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in 200 reached 200.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ratio
  • trends
  • cultural factors
  • societal influences
  • biological factors
  • awareness campaigns
  • public health initiatives
  • correlated declines
  • social factors
  • economic factors
  • stress levels
  • employment status
  • education levels
  • income
  • advertising
  • tobacco industry
  • marketing tactics
  • demographics
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