In most countries, the crime rate is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. Why do you think that is? What can be done to reduce the crime rate?

Evidence suggests that in the vast majority of

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the percentage of

crime

in cities is higher than

villages

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in villages

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.

Although

there are specific root causes behind

this

issue, effective policies can be adopted to remedy

this

situation. There are two main reasons why public insecurity in cities has a bigger share in comparison with

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countrysides

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.

Firstly

, the population density is to blame.

That is

,

unless

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cities

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in cities

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, in rural areas most

people

know each other or are relatives thanks to the small community that they have,

therefore

; it is less likely that rural dwellers

commite

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commit

commute

committed

a

crime

.

For example

, a thief presumably

do

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not steal from her or his family which is not the case

for

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urban areas where

people

are strange.

Secondly

,in small regions most of the population

are belong

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to the same social class

while

citizens come from a wide

rage

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of classes so, lower classes might tend to offense the higher

classe

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classes

class

of society and it can be seen that most of the thieves are poor and have tried to rob a wealthy person. There are,

however

, some solutions to tackle

this

phenomenon. One step would

providing

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higher education for all

people

.

That is

to say, the more citizens are educated, the less they turn into criminals, Take a doctor or teacher as an example;

these kind

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of

people

almost never deliberately commit a

crime

. Another viable alternative is to create more job opportunities in order to decrease deprivation. poverty leads to many social problems including criminal behaviours and wealthier

people

do not want to engage

with

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any wrongdoing.

To conclude

, high

polpulation

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pollution

is the main cause of

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the high

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level of

crime

in urban regions and in spite of all contributing factors,

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community

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a community

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with higher education and lucrative jobs

are

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the main key to

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this

problem.