The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts
illustrates
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data about the population rate in the 3 different age groups in
Yemen
an
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and
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Italy in 2000 and
it's
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its
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prediction for 2050.
Overall
it can be seen that the oldest
group
in Italy continues growing significantly
while
this
rate is going to have a slight increase in
Yemen
. In 2000, 50.1% of
Yemen
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population was
the
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0-14 category
and
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43.3%
was belong
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to the 15-59 years old and only 3.6% of the community was over 60.
On the other hand
, the youngest
group
age occupied 14.3% of
Italy
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population and the 15-59 years old had the biggest proportion with 61.6%.
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elderlies had a 24.1% share
in
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this
year. It is predicted that in 2050 the youngest
group
in
Yemen
will decrease to 37%.
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middle
group
will show an increase to 57.3% and elderlies are going to slightly
raise
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to 5.7% . The 0-14
group
of Italy
also
will slowly drop to 11.5%
as well as
the 15-59 category which will decrease to 46.2%. But the rate of over the 60's will almost be doubled by 42.3%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age distribution
  • population demographics
  • projected
  • projections
  • notable changes
  • demographic changes
  • implications
  • birth rates
  • life expectancy
  • senior citizens
  • young population
  • working-age population
  • dependency ratio
  • aging population
  • socio-economic impact
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