Essay topics: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. write a letter to your friend In your letter * say how you feel about the visit * suggest what you could do on his/her birthday *try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea
Dear Marry,
Hope you are doing well. I am doing fine.
I
excited ,will see you .
I feel excited about you coming to Add a verb
I am
I was
Thaliand
and Correct your spelling
Thailand
visit
mine.I Wrong verb form
visiting
am not wait
to see you.
Birthday ,I recommend you do Change the verb form
am not waiting
somethink
,Correct your spelling
something
for example
Party
, play Correct article usage
a Party
vido
games,play Correct your spelling
video
card
and Fix the agreement mistake
cards
wacthing
Correct your spelling
watch
the
movie . But I will Correct article usage
a
cooking
special for her.It is Change the verb form
cook
be cooking
Correct article usage
a secreat
secreat
.
Correct your spelling
secret
Do
you think of your idea above? If you agree and disagree.You answer Correct pronoun usage
What do
email
Fix the agreement mistake
emails
,
orRemove the comma
apply
sugguest
what Correct your spelling
suggest
do
on Fix the infinitive
to do
birthday
.
Add an article
a birthday
Lookforward
to seeing you.
Best wishes,
KanCorrect your spelling
Look forward
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Coherence & Cohesion
Try to structure your letter with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single aspect of your letter. This will enhance readability and make your letter more coherent.
Task Achievement
Ensure to directly address all parts of the task, specifically expressing how you feel about the visit, suggesting birthday activities more clearly, and seeking your friend's opinion in a straightforward manner.
Language Proficiency
Look into improving your grammar and spelling to avoid simple errors that can detract from the clarity of your message. Even small inaccuracies can sometimes confuse the reader.
Task Achievement
You've done well in expressing enthusiasm for your friend's upcoming visit, which makes the letter friendly and welcoming.
Content Creativity
The inclusion of a surprise cooking plan adds a personal and thoughtful touch to the birthday celebration proposal.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite