The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram gives information about how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity and how it is used to reach us.
This
action consists of 5 steps Firstly
. Cold water
is pumped down into the injection well. The injection well is connected to the geothermal zone which is under the earth’s surface and it is 4.5 km deep. Cold water
reaches the geothermal zone which is full of hot rocks. Water
became hot from the heat of rocks. Then
pumped up to the surface, it goes through the production well which is also
4.5 km long. Then
, the condenser collects all the hot water
and steam from the water
and powers the turbine. Next,
the turbine not only starts spinning but also
powers the generator. Finally
, The generator produces electricity and delivers it all over the world by an electric pole.Submitted by buyabuya201 on
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