You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news with your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● explain where the money came from ● say what you intend to do with the money ● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.

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Dear Payam, I am writing to inform you that I came into a lot of money and I am delighted to tell you that good days will come. Actually, we had a big family land that I could sell

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last

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week. The worth of the land was above 0ne-million

dolars

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dollars

and I am really a lucky man that after spending

long-days

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long days

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almost 10 years were taken time.

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Finally

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reach

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reached

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my dream. I am going to buy a house in Dubai

city

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City

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and immigrate

for living

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to live

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there.

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Then

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, my plan is to run my own

businnes

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business

and construct a tennis club. I want to invite you to my new house in Dubai and

make

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have

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funny

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fun

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celebration with some

our

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of our

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common friends

also

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I will be

bouth

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buying

a luxurious car in the first month too. I think that I will travel to Dubai three days later and after buying my

accomodation

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accommodation

I will keep you posted

that

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when

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you come. I am going to book some rooms and salons for our celebration in the big hotel.Please let me know if you are interested in coming. I look forward to your reply. Best wishes, Payam

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Coherence & Cohesion

Consider using transition words to better connect sentences and paragraphs, enhancing the flow of ideas.

Grammar & Accuracy

Double-check for typos and minor grammatical errors to polish your writing. While these do not significantly impact the clarity, they can detract from the overall professionalism.

Task Achievement

To further enhance task achievement, you could expand on how the money will impact your life and share more details about the celebration plans.

Task Achievement

You successfully informed your friend about the source of your fortune, your plans for the money, and invited them to celebrate, which fulfills the prompt requirements.

Tone & Register

Your closing salutation is warm and appropriate, contributing to a suitable tone for the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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