You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news with your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● explain where the money came from ● say what you intend to do with the money ● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.
Dear Payam,
I am writing to inform you that I came into a lot of money and I am delighted to tell you that good days will come.
Actually, we had a big family land that I could sell
it
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apply
last
week. The worth of the land was above 0ne-million dolars
and I am really a lucky man that after spending Correct your spelling
dollars
long-days
almost 10 years were taken time. Correct your spelling
long days
Finally
I Add a comma
Finally,
reach
my dream. I am going to buy a house in Dubai Wrong verb form
reached
city
and immigrate Capitalize word
City
for living
Change preposition
to live
.
Rephrase
there.
Then
, my plan is to run my own businnes
and construct a tennis club. I want to invite you to my new house in Dubai and Correct your spelling
business
make
a Verb problem
have
funny
celebration with some Correct word choice
fun
our
common friends Change preposition
of our
also
I will be bouth
a luxurious car in the first month too.
I think that I will travel to Dubai three days later and after buying my Correct your spelling
buying
accomodation
I will keep you posted Correct your spelling
accommodation
that
you come. I am going to book some rooms and salons for our celebration in the big hotel.Please let me know if you are interested in coming.
I look forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
PayamCorrect word choice
when
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Coherence & Cohesion
Consider using transition words to better connect sentences and paragraphs, enhancing the flow of ideas.
Grammar & Accuracy
Double-check for typos and minor grammatical errors to polish your writing. While these do not significantly impact the clarity, they can detract from the overall professionalism.
Task Achievement
To further enhance task achievement, you could expand on how the money will impact your life and share more details about the celebration plans.
Task Achievement
You successfully informed your friend about the source of your fortune, your plans for the money, and invited them to celebrate, which fulfills the prompt requirements.
Tone & Register
Your closing salutation is warm and appropriate, contributing to a suitable tone for the letter.