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The chart below give information about level of education in Glasgow,a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The chart below give information about level of education in Glasgow,a city in Scotland, in 2010.
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The educational attainment out of 100 people in Glasgow is illustrated in the chart, divided into
age
 groups for the year 2010
while
 diagrams display the percentage of individuals with qualifications, separated by gender.
Overall
, it can be seen on the chart that
population
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the population
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 over 75 are the most uneducated as opposed to
generation
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the generation
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 which varies from 24 to 35. It is noticeable from the diagrams that
literacy
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the literacy
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 rate among
men
 and
women
 is almost the same. People from 16-24 and 35-50 years old
shows
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 the same statistics. The 24-35
age
 group has the highest number of people who have
the
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a
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university
 diploma (76) which
exceed
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exceeds
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 mentioned
before
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apply
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age
 groups by 5 persons,
however
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however,
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 the number of nations who have no
any
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apply
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degree is the same
with
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as
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 theirs. Half of the folk
by
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in
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50
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the 50
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-75
age
 range
has
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have
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the
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a
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university
 degree. Only a
querter
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quarter
 of adults who are 75+
has
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have
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 graduated
the
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from the
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university
, the majority of them have no
any
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apply
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qualifications at all.
According to
 the diagrams, there is 33% of
men
 and
women
 who has finished school. The
percentagewise
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percentage
 of
men
 who have
university
diploma
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diplomas
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 are 3% higher than
women
.
Additionally
,
men
 and
women
 who
has
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have
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 not finished any institutions in
percents
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percentages
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is
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are
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 35% and 38% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, men, women, university with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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