Increasingly, many governments around the world are choosing to provide greater funding for scientific and technological development rather than investing in arts and culture. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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high

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of governments in all nations

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spend

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a lot of money

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scientists

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and technology

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, rather than

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. I believe

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drawbacks developing. The primary reason why

arts

is important is the develop skills that can

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have in entire their

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.

Arts

can motivate

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to be creative and imaginative.

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many children can improve their skills if they grow with plenty of different

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of

arts

.

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arts

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in arts

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, that will

helps

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all individuals to enhance

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and create opportunities for themselves to be better in their

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and their societies. The second

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is the expression of

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and culture.

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their thought and their culture

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arts

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will help them

to

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reduce

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. To illustrate, many experts say

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incredibly

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therapy for

people

who suffering from mental health or anxiety.

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people

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to create art that will boost the economy by attracting

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visitor

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visitors

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and tourists.

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, governments can benefit greatly

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this

money to improve all services. In conclusion, art can help

people

to be creative and imaginative

as well as

express their

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feelings

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and

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.

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greater

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investment for governments. In my opinion, I think all areas

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science and art should

treat

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equally because

this

will help all

workplace

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and individuals.