A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be a suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job
Dear John,
I hope you're well. I'm writing
this
letter to let you know that there is a vacancy in GMC Motors, which suits you perfectly as you have completed your mechanical degree with high scores.
GMC Motors are currently looking for an energetic and young engineers
to work on their production line. They look for production experts who are familiar with repair and retrofitting of all parts together, Correct the article-noun agreement
energetic and young engineers
an energetic and young engineer
as well as
to do
Change the verb form
doing
inspection
and Fix the agreement mistake
inspections
perform
quality control on the newly produced cars.
I know very well that your previous experience in Wrong verb form
performing
manufacturing
of cars is crucial and being a mechanical engineer you would love Correct article usage
the manufacturing
this
job as this
is a highly paid job as well. Moreover
, you have studied 3D design courses, which is an added benefit for
your experience.
There are many ways to Change preposition
to
apply
Add the preposition
apply for
this
job, but you are away from the city now. So, it's better for you to apply through the company website. I hope there will be a vast number of applicants will
apply for these jobs, but only the selected candidates will be called for an online interview. Correct pronoun usage
who will
Then
, the second level will be a face to face
interview that you need to come in person.
All the best,
James.Add a hyphen
face-to-face
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Task Achievement
While your letter addresses all parts of the task effectively, adding more details about the job itself, such as specific roles, or about your friend's qualifications and experiences, would enrich the content.
Coherence and Cohesion
To further improve coherence and cohesion, consider using a wider range of linking words or phrases to ensure a smoother transition between ideas and paragraphs.
Structure
You have a structured approach, beginning with a greeting, then discussing the job, explaining why it’s suitable, and how to apply, before closing. This maintains a logical flow.
Tone
Your tone is appropriately formal and friendly, which suits the context of writing to a friend about a professional opportunity.