A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be a suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job

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Dear John, I hope you're well. I'm writing

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letter to let you know that there is a vacancy in GMC Motors, which suits you perfectly as you have completed your mechanical degree with high scores. GMC Motors are currently looking for

an energetic and young engineers

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energetic and young engineers

an energetic and young engineer

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to work on their production line. They look for production experts who are familiar with repair and retrofitting of all parts together,

as well as

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to do

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doing

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inspection

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inspections

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and

perform

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performing

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quality control on the newly produced cars. I know very well that your previous experience in

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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of cars is crucial and being a mechanical engineer you would love

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job as

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is a highly paid job as well.

Moreover

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, you have studied 3D design courses, which is an added benefit

for

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your experience. There are many ways to

apply

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apply for

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this

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job, but you are away from the city now. So, it's better for you to apply through the company website. I hope there will be a vast number of applicants

will

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who will

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apply for these jobs, but only the selected candidates will be called for an online interview.

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, the second level will be a

face to face

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interview that you need to come in person. All the best, James.

prasadjul1986Fri May 10 2024

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Task Achievement

While your letter addresses all parts of the task effectively, adding more details about the job itself, such as specific roles, or about your friend's qualifications and experiences, would enrich the content.

Coherence and Cohesion

To further improve coherence and cohesion, consider using a wider range of linking words or phrases to ensure a smoother transition between ideas and paragraphs.

Structure

You have a structured approach, beginning with a greeting, then discussing the job, explaining why it’s suitable, and how to apply, before closing. This maintains a logical flow.

Tone

Your tone is appropriately formal and friendly, which suits the context of writing to a friend about a professional opportunity.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

208 words

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