The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
The bar chart below provides information about air
pollution
levels and its
sources between the different countries.
In general, the country which has the highest air Correct pronoun usage
their
pollution
level is China. By contrast
, Australia has the lowest degree of pollution
In the
China Correct article usage
apply
mostly
Industry creates Correct your spelling
most
pollution
which is 80 PPM
, while
Transport and Electricity Generation has
70 and 60 Correct subject-verb agreement
have
PPM
respectively. Furthermore
, in the
America Transport Correct article usage
apply
makes
the highest value of air Verb problem
has
pollution
which is nearly 60, while
Industry and Electricity Generation produces
slightly less. (38 and 30 Correct subject-verb agreement
produce
PPM
)
On the other hand
, Japan which placed third in the bar chart has a significant difference in the indicators between Industry and Electricity Generation which is 42 and 10. Moreover
Australia Add a comma
Moreover,
that
produced the lowest level of Correct pronoun usage
which
pollution
has similar rates which is
nearly 20 Change the verb form
are
PPM
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