You have unexpectedly come into a large sum of money and you want to share this good news with your friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ● explain where the money came from ● say what you intend to do with the money ● invite your friend to celebrate your good fortune.
Dear Xhixhi,
Hello Xhi, I hope you
still
in great condition when you Add a missing verb
are still
receieve
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receive
this
message. I am writing Linking Words
this
letter to Linking Words
infrom
you that recently Correct your spelling
inform
i
got Change the capitalization
I
lot
of Change the article
a lot
money
, i never Use synonyms
expect
can gain Wrong verb form
expected
this
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money
. Use synonyms
This
is become Linking Words
lucky
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a lucky
moment
for me.
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Firstly
, I never Linking Words
expect
that Wrong verb form
expected
i
can got Change the capitalization
I
lot
of Change the article
a lot
money
from my Use synonyms
invest
in Replace the word
investment
capital
market, Add an article
the capital
i
started Change the capitalization
I
invest
in one of Wrong verb form
investing
bank
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the bank
stock
in Fix the agreement mistake
stocks
capital
market Add an article
the capital
in
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apply
last
year and I never Linking Words
check
these. Wrong verb form
checked
However
, yesterday I Linking Words
check
it in my investment app and when Wrong verb form
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i
saw my stock the profit Change the capitalization
I
almost
90%. Add a missing verb
was almost
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is become
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becomes
has become
amazing
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an amazing
moment
for me i never Use synonyms
get
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had
profit
as big Correct article usage
a profit
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this
before.
I am going to buy some property Change preposition
as this
such
as a house and Linking Words
a
land, if you have good Remove the article
apply
refrensi
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reference
about
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for
great
property you can Add an article
the great
infrom
to me, I will give you Correct your spelling
inform
in from
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money
if you can help me.
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the money
Secondly
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a
free time Correct determiner usage
some
in
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apply
this
weekend please come to my house, Linking Words
i
have plans Change the capitalization
I
for
conduct Change preposition
to
private
party to celebrate Correct article usage
a private
this
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moment
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, you can invite your couple Linking Words
for
join with asChange preposition
to
,
it will be Remove the comma
apply
stunning
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a stunning
the stunning
moment
for us. Ocean thanks for your nice attention, I am looking forward to hearing from you.
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Your
sincerely,
Mr.BinbinCorrect the word
Yours
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Grammar and Punctuation
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Clarity
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Coherence
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Tone
While informal language is acceptable in a letter to a friend, maintaining a certain level of formality can help in clearly expressing ideas without diminishing the personal touch.
Engagement
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Structure
The structure of the letter, including the opening and closing, is well handled, creating a friendly tone.
Content
You've clearly addressed all parts of the task, providing detailed explanations and extending an invitation that adds a personal touch to your letter.