The chart below shows the percentage change in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality.
The line graph provides information about the rate of
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delinquencies
in various three areas ( suburban, rural, urban) from 1995 to 1998. Units are Replace the word
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measure
of percentage.
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Overall
, the figure for criminals decreased in each area
all the period. However
, committing
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crimes
which occurred in suburban
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suburbs
was
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were
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at the
the
peak in 1996.
Moving to a detailed analysis, the majority of teenagers were doer Change the word
their
crimes
in rural area
and the lowest indicator was witnessed in urban Fix the agreement mistake
areas
area
, which accounted Fix the agreement mistake
areas
of
3% and 0% respectively at the beginning of the period. Rural and urban areas increased slightly after a year, Change preposition
for
while
the rate of rural and urban areas decreased gradually in 1996 and 1998. At the end
of the period, the former and the latter being
responsible for -2% and -4% in turn.
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were
area
, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
initially
, the indicator of suburban was -2% and rise. The highest proportion of suburban area
where commit Fix the agreement mistake
areas
crimes
by under 18 wrongdoers was the peak, at 8% in 1996. In contrast
, this
area
declined dramatically and reached to
-2%, Change preposition
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while
growth gradually for
0%.Change preposition
to
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