The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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Contained in the two maps is information pertaining to changes which happened in a university sports area from 1990 to now.

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, there has been an increase in the number of tennis

courts

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be observed that

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renovations have included a greater number of amenities,

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the car park and parking have been removed. Beginning with the north-western half of the university sports

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, as far as the park was concerned, it has been replaced with a basketball court. Moving onto the north-east where an outdoor pool has been converted into an indoor one.

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, a changing room which was below the reception has been expanded and redeveloped to the east. Moving onto the southern part where the car park has been demolished to make way for tennis

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which have been doubled from 2 to 4

courts

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, the tennis

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have been torn down and a fitness centre has been built, meaning students

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staff can have

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in doing exercises. A final point of interest is that the café and reception remained untouched

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

180 words

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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Eating too much sugar is harmful for health. Some people think that it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is individual responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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