The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts provide key information about
costract
Correct your spelling
contract
methods of accessing the
news
in two countries,
Canada
and
Australia
. The units are measured by Percentages.
Overall
,
It is clear that
Tv
Correct your spelling
TV news
show examples
News
represents a significant
portion
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
both countries.
In addition
, website
news
is the predominant part
in
Change preposition
of
show examples
Australia
.
Whereas
,
news
that is
not specified is the tiniest
portion
in
Canada
.
According to
what is shown In
canada
Change the capitalization
Canada
show examples
. Television
news
is the largest
portion
by
Change preposition
of
show examples
the third-
quarters
Fix the agreement mistake
quarter
show examples
of accessing
news
. Radio
news
showed a modest ratio throughout
Canada
, only about 7%.
Moreover
,
this
proportion is double that of newspapers.
While
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
website sources show a crucial role
around
Change preposition
in around
show examples
36 per cent. The smallest
portion
of accessing the
news
was the
news
that was
News-not
Correct your spelling
Not
show examples
specified. In terms of
Australia
, Online sources are the highest percentages and represent more than half of the
portion
.
However
, both Radio and
news
that were not specified showed a similar tiniest fraction, almost 2%. Television
news
play
Change the verb form
plays
show examples
a major role
following
Change preposition
in following
show examples
online sources about third.
Additionally
, the smallest
portion
of accessing
news
in
Australia
was in the print
news
.
Submitted by zaidamrat5 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words news, canada, australia, portion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays: