The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998.
The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of committed
crimes
by delinquents from 1995 to 1998. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the percentages of crimes
were observed in all areas.
Moving to a detailed analysis, the indicator of crimes
in a rural area
ranked first,
accounting for approximately 3%, while
that of a suburban area
was 2% in 1995. In the following 2 years, a slight decrease was witnessed in committed crimes
in the rural area
, at 2%, while
the percentage of crimes
in the suburban area
increased before decreasing to -2%. The figure for crimes
in the suburban area
overtook that for the rural area
, at 0% and 2% respectively in 1998.
Regarding the proportion of crimes
in an urban area
, it stood at roughly 0.1% at the beginning of the period. The percentage of crimes
in the urban area
climbed before going down to -5% at the end
of the period.Submitted by quluzadenurlan107 on
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