The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998.

The line graph gives information about percentage changes in total crime arrests for persons under 18 by locality, 1995-1998.
The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of committed
crimes
by delinquents from 1995 to 1998. Units are measured in percentages.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the percentages of
crimes
were observed in all areas. Moving to a detailed analysis, the indicator of
crimes
in a rural
area
ranked
first,
accounting for approximately 3%,
while
that of a suburban
area
was 2% in 1995. In the following 2 years, a slight decrease was witnessed in committed
crimes
in the rural
area
, at 2%,
while
the percentage of
crimes
in the suburban
area
increased before decreasing to -2%. The figure for
crimes
in the suburban
area
overtook that for the rural
area
, at 0% and 2% respectively in 1998. Regarding the proportion of
crimes
in an urban
area
, it stood at roughly 0.1% at the beginning of the period. The percentage of
crimes
in the urban
area
climbed before going down to -5%
at the end
of the period.
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