The bar chart shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in wales in 2001/2002 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.

The bar chart shows the highest qualification attained by sex for the working age population in wales in 2001/2002 summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons were relavant.
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The bar graph displays the highest education level obtained by both females and males who are of working age individuals in Wales region between 2001 to 2002.
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it is clear that
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the ratio of men and women is slightly similar except for GCE and GCSE grads which had
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unbalanced ratio between females and males. As the data shows, when it comes to GCE A level or equivalent men outnumber women by double at about 30%,
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GCSE grade A-C or equivalent were dominant by women at approximately 30%.
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, a higher education qualification had the lowest rate in both genders which was less than ten percent in the same period.
On the other hand
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, the bar chart of degrees and other qualifications are nearly identical above 10 per cent, and the difference in percentage between both sexes is minor.
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, adults with no qualification overcome the mentioned charts twice their numbers at nearly the fifth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • qualification
  • attained
  • working age population
  • distribution
  • proportion
  • highly qualified
  • noticeable trends
  • patterns
  • significant
  • data
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