The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following illustration gives information about the

number

of male and female

employees

in Australia

last

year. The bar chart depicts 7 sectors of employment.

There

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The

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number

of female professionals and clerical is slightly more than the

number

of male

employees

. The biggest difference between the

number

of

employees

is in the

number

of tradespeople, which is 800

thousand

people, unlike

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the

number

of professionals where we can see a very slight difference. The same

number

of female

employees

we can observe in tradespeople and production, where we can see 100

thousand

in each of them,

however

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the

number

of males differs a lot. 900

thousand

males work as tradespeople,

while

in production there are around 550

thousand

men working. As a whole, more males are employed in comparison with the

number

of female

employees

almost in

eac

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each

sector shown.

However

, in clerical and professional types of

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jobs

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job

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job,

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more women are employed.