The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of male and female

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in Australia

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year. The bar chart depicts 7 sectors of employment.

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of female professionals and clerical is slightly more than the

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of male

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. The biggest difference between the

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of

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is in the

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of tradespeople, which is 800

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people, unlike

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the

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of professionals where we can see a very slight difference. The same

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of female

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we can observe in tradespeople and production, where we can see 100

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in each of them,

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the

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of males differs a lot. 900

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males work as tradespeople,

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in production there are around 550

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men working. As a whole, more males are employed in comparison with the

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of female

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almost in

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each

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, in clerical and professional types of

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more women are employed.