The line graph shows information about the number of museum visitors in the UK in summer and winter of 2005

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information about the number of

museum

visits in the UK over the

summer

and

winter

seasons in 2005

Overall

, that of visitors in

summer

is seen the highest trend at twelve o'

clock

and people who came to

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in

winter

experienced a lower trend

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of

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in

summer

started from 650 people at ten o'

clock

while

in

winter

published gradually dropped rate and 400 people at 10 o'

clock

in 2005.

Then

, guests in

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in

summer

figure showed rapidly grew and reached

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1300

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the rate of guests in

winter

recorded slightly fell to 350

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summer

recorded a gradual

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and reached

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1500 wight at twelve o'

clock

. And in

winter

showed slowly increased to 600

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at 12 o'

clock

. After in

winter

at 15 o'

clock

displayed sharply declined to 0 body. And

this

time visitors

in

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museum

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in

summer

trend saw a slight drop to 900

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.

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was no change in

winter

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population until 18 o'

clock

and there was minimal change in

summer

and

published

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slowly fell to 800 head at 16 o'

clock

, After,

this

result

demonstrated

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swiftly dipped to 400 head.

Then

, the number of guests in

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in

summer

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steeply deteriorated to 0 individual 220 words