The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graphic shows
crime
figures for last
year in the United Kingdom. The line graph shows the connection between criminal activity and age and the pie chart a breakdown of different crime
types.
It is evident when looking at the line graph that teenagers and those in their early twenties were responsible for a disproportionately high level of crime
. The involvement in crime
peaked at twenty years old with nearly a million crimes
being committed. This
then
fell dramatically and levelled off at age 28 and continued to decrease with age.
The pie chart shows that serious crimes
were alarmingly high with nearly half of crimes
identified as being violent in nature. Property and drug crime
had similar levels at just under a quarter and crimes
related to social disorder were relatively low at 9%.
Overall
, we can see that the vast majority of crimes
- over 75% - were committed by older teens and people in their early twenties and the crimes
identified in the graphic most
were related to violence.Correct quantifier usage
apply
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