Students should pay the fukk cost for their own study,because university education benefits individuals rather than society.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pupils are suggested to afford

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all the

cost

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costs

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of their own

study

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studies

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because college lessons bring more benefits to each

of

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individual than

society

at all.

This

writer

disagree

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with

this

statement and will explain why.

To begin

with,people

enroll

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universities

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courses can

creat

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create

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value for

community

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the community

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.

In other words

,after graduating from

schools

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school

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,there will be an increase in workers,who have

ability

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to adapt the modern technology development,

also

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have enough knowledge and necessary skills.

As a result

,

society

will never have a shortage

in

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high-quality workers.

Additionally

,these students offer community to tackle the unemployment issues,with the certification degree,it is much

more easily

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to apply

in

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companies or

if

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have more chances to

appear

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many

going

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concern

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concerns

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which

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sprout around the country.

Furthermore

,there are many students in the

wprld

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world

do

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not have

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condition

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conditions

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to take part in

a

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higher education.

Although

they have

ability

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and dreams,

the

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poverty prevents them from going to colleges where need to

paying

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high

fee

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fees

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.

Society

and

goverments

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governments

government

have

mission

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a mission

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to take care more

avout

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about

these situations,because

of

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gaining higher knowledge is

a

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key to faster the growth of one nation and

facilitate

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citizen’s life. In conclusion,in spite of studying

unviersities

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universities

has

beneficial

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effect on

individual

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individuals

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,

society

has

responsibility

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the responsibility

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to littlely invest in study

fee

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fees

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cause supporting students

contribute

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so much

in

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improving countries and

also

help

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poor pupils.