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of
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increased in majorly many cities around the globe. There are many factors
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have caused
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, mainly no restriction on heavy
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such
as
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, high rate of unemployment and no social group. But
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by providing rehabilitation and enforcing stern
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on sell or use of these
drugs
.
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reason for
this
problem is
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availability of
drugs
and crystals. Now it is easy for any aged person to get these types of
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drugs
, they can just get it in any downtown area where
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to sell it illegally.
In addition
to that, now many countries have legalized cannabis because that now
people
can get in shop. So,
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these.
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can buy it by going
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shop.
In addition
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these shops with
Drugs
and crystals. Another reason is
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having no job and no social group makes
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lonely and stressed because of
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turn to
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side to relax and within
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time they habituated to it.
In order to curtail
this
, I think sending these
people
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a big difference in their lives.
This
will make them realize that what they are doing is not good for their future and they are ruining their life by it. Another measure should be taken by the Government that there should stern
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imposed on
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of these products.
Furthermore
,
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should welcome companies which can provide jobs.
This
way employment will increase, and
people
will start to get
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in
such
companies.
In conclusion, I believe that
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usage of
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, unemployment and no social activities are the main cause of
this
problem,
this
can be curtailed by increasing the employment rate and creating a strict rule on
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of these items.