The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.
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illustrates
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salaries
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to Luxembourg's teachers and Korean tutors had the longest Wrong verb form
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years
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looking at details. Luxembourg's starting point was 80,000US$ and to achieve the highest income with 13900US$, teachers had to wait 30 years
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the
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to reach the top salary was
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were
years
for Japan and Korea with 62,400US$ and 84,500US$ respectively.
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, Australia
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Australian
Denmark's
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Denmark
teacher
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teachers
years
to be paid maximum
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which Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
were
48,00US$ and 54,000US$. Change the verb form
was
However
, their starting point was 34,000US$ and 47,000US$ respectively.Submitted by m.tavasoli18 on
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